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Shock @ Awe

She’d never had to beg to come,

In doing so, she came undone.

The shock within her eyes was real,

She’d never know how it could feel!

Simple orgasms freely given,

Versus those to which she’s driven,

And in such frustrated state,

Has to beg before too late.

Tears of anguish, sobs and sighs,

Bitten lip and quivering thighs.

Knowing she has given in,

To feed a Dom’s unholy sin,

And in this chosen, weakened place,

She finds herself and her new face.

Intensified does not explain,

How her arousal comes from pain,

Collar, whether real or thought,

Reminds her that her soul was bought,

Paid to him with full disclosure,

Leaving her in full exposure,

To his whims and his commands,

Loving, needing his demands.

So with awe, her eyes meet mine,

As she’s touched the Great Divine,

Being true to who she is,

Being locked and being his.

Master Grey 2/19/25

Responses to “Shock @ Awe”

  1. jayeelisewrites

    I hadn’t seen this poem before – it links back nicely to your post from today!

    “And in this chosen, weakened place, She finds herself and her new face.” These verses are extremely powerful and capture the submissive awakening so well.

    Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Grey Man

      Thank you for going back and looking that means a lot to an author as I’m sure you know. I will admit that quite often my poetry is a reaction to or an attempt to describe a real life situation that was true of this poem.

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      1. jayeelisewrites

        It’s always rewarding to go back into the archives to watch how folks’ thoughts and ideas develop. I have a hard time doing this with my own work, but I love that I can do this with others!

        Definitely a poem that’s going on my “Favorites” list! Thanks!

      2. Grey Man

        Do you think I shold publish an anthology?

  2. jayeelisewrites

    Could do! Although, would that mean pulling these from the blog?

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    1. Grey Man

      No…I wouldn’t do that for the poetry.

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